Today we began our production! I was really excited to begin making this story come alive, and see how everything is going to look on screen. We decided that we would start by filming the scenes from the security cameras, that we close the opening with. We started with these scenes because since we have other actors and components outside of me and my partner, we had to make the schedule work for everyone. We chose these scenes because the dog we are using from my partners friend was available, and because my partners dad who plays a big role in the opening was not available for filming this week. We filmed three different scenes from different cameras, and angles. All looking at the same walk that Olivia is taking with her dog, after the fight with Jonathan.
Friday, February 28, 2025
Day one production
Monday, February 24, 2025
Representation
Adding on to the mis-en-scene discussed last week, I have one final prop that is important to the representation of the mother in the narrative. Before I get into that, I realized that I haven't been using the character's names in my blogs. I am officially introducing you to Olivia the daughter, Rebecca the mother, and Jonothan the father. The names we chose don't have meaning, we just wanted simple names to keep it easy. In the scenes of the narrative the characters don't really refer to each other with names, they use dad and mom instead, so we didn't think too much on these names.
Going back to the prop, we decided to add this element to show the relationship between Olivia and Rebecca, since it's limited to the photos seen in the credits. The prop will be placed in Olivia's room, on either her desk or nightstand. It will be a small and antique photo frame with a photo of Rebecca in it. This frame is generational and has been in the family for a while. As Olivia was growing up, Rebecca would put things aside for her to eventually inherit. Olivia found this stash shortly after Rebecca passed away, the fame caught her eye. This would be shown to the audience in the film (not the opening) through a flashback of Olivia going through the things Rebecca left behind for her.
To create this prop, we will take an antique photo frame, from either Goodwill or online like Amazon, and place a photo of Rebecca smiling in it. To get this photo we will use my partners mom, since my partner is the actor for Olvia it makes sense for her mother to play and pose as Rebecca.
Saturday, February 22, 2025
Audio
Friday, February 21, 2025
Storyboard
Thursday, February 20, 2025
Tattoos
Wednesday, February 19, 2025
Bottle prop
A main element in the plot is the fathers alcoholic addiction. This leads him to his aggressive lash outs, and mood swings with his daughter. Besides using emotions and arguments to clearly show this, we brainstormed an idea to create a prop that will help further convey this element.
We obviously can't legally purchase or drink any alcoholic beverages, so we got creative with how we will make our own bottles. We are going to use glass bottles such as the ones from the San Pellegrino sparkling water company. We will remove their stickers, and glue on new stickers we printed out of popular alcoholic names. The bottles will be filled with water, the dark green glass they are made out of makes it really hard to see the substance inside so it doesn't call for us to fill them with anything special.
Tuesday, February 18, 2025
Character Development
The character I chose to develop throughout my narrative, is the father. We see his behavior and relationship with his daughter change for the worst through flashbacks and memories. By developing his personality, viewers understand the gravity of the situation and the toll that his wife's passing has taken on him.
A character development usually starts negative, and grows into something positive, but because of my plot having these aggressive and sad components, I am using the usual character development backwards. The character development will help me get the backstory across, and will bring viewers up to speed on the upcoming scenes. My character development will mostly take place in the first 45 seconds of my opening.
I will have the credits with the photos of the old memories rolling, and in the photos the father will be included. This will highlight his old tone of happiness, and love. Which will contrast with the following scene, of his fight with his daughter, showing he has developed into a cold and distant father.
The way the father will represent his happiness in the phots of the old memories is by being really close with the family, but especially with the mother. He will be smiling, and laughing in the pictures, all while looking intensely at his beloved wife and daughter. In some photos, he will look proud, and full of care for his family's lives. The father will also look healthy and in good shape in these photos.
On the other hand, to portray his character development in the following scenes the father will look tired, and unhappy. He will seem to be unhealthy, unstable, and miserable. Craving for alcohol, and full of tiredness. Unlike the photos, I also have the component of a script to present his character development. The script I talked about in my last blog evidently shows his changed feelings for his daughter, and his tone while speaking to her. His word choice is important, it sticks and stings.
By incorporating all of this, I can show the fathers character development physically, and emotionally. Without this development, the plot wouldn't be able to connect, and bring the curse upon the daughter. The fathers character development is the most important because although he is not the main character, he is the antagonist. His character takes and gives from the protagonist, which builds up the main character (daughter).
Friday, February 14, 2025
Script
To be able to convey the plot and backstory subtly, a script will help. I started making a short script that is around 45 seconds. A lot of the scenes will have heavy emotions, but not many words, therefore I kept it short for now.
The cursing shows how infuriated the father really is and in turn, the weight of his words reflect on his daughters emotions. I tried to keep the swearing to a limit because then it becomes really vulgar, but when I tried to eliminate it all together it felt as something was missing. This is the script I will be using, minor changes might be made later on throughout the production process...
Script:
Father- “Omfg! You're so lazy, what have you even done all day? All you ever do is lay on the couch.
Daughter- Calm down, I just got home from work- (pause) have u been drinking??
Father- NO BITCH! *
Daughter- (crying)
Father- AND YOU STILL HAVEN'T GOTTEN THAT TATTOO REMOVED? I CAN'T BELIVE YOU WOULD EVER EVEN GET ONE IN THE FIRST PLACE WITHOUT MY PERMISSION. (yelling)
Daughter- Dad! I told u I didn’t get this- (cut off)
Father- STOP LYING TO ME. (yelling)
Father- Enough.
Daughter- (bawling)
-Scene ends, daughter runs to her room
-Time skip, killer has hacked into cameras
Killer- Lets see if I've done well...
*Hits daughter
The names of the characters are still being decided, but I'm going to keep them basic. The actions and pauses help accentuate the scenes and are really important. With the script down, I can start visualizing and storyboarding my scenes as a planification for the beginning of production next week.
Thursday, February 13, 2025
Project idea
After researching and brainstorming I have created a solid idea for my opening. I came up with the plot, and I think it outlines the genre of horror really well. The story follows a teenage girl, and her father.
Background: Recently, a mother and her daughter got into a car crash. The daughter (protagonist) was able to survive, but unfortunately her mother passed away. This has left the daughters father in shambles, as he is now distraught and trying to cope. A killer who curses his victims when they are at their lowest, and filled with depression, is the antagonist of the plot. He is not known by any of the characters, and the only way to break his curse which constantly feeds on sadness, is to repair your heart and restore your happiness and love. When a victim is cursed, a small tattoo of an infinity sign with words intertwined, appears on their wrist. The killer has a matching one on his wrist as well. Once the curse is broken, the killer dies and the tattoo fades.
Plot: As a result of his wife's tragic and sudden passing, the father has become abusive and distant with his daughter. He has developed some heavy drinking issues and has been staying out late. One night, he returns home from work, and drinking. He goes into the house and pours himself another drink, only to see the sink is full of dirty dishes. This is usually taken care of by his daughter, as she has been doing most of the housework ever since her mother passed away. He is immediately filled with rage, and memories, as this would have never happened if his wife was still around. She was always very precise and organized, she loved to clean, and he adored her. The daughter and father have an intense argument, which results in him hitting her. She is shattered, and runs up to her room to cry alone. She keeps picking and trying to peel at her skin, she hates the tattoo and she has no clue how she got it. To clear her head, she goes for a walk with her dog, outside. Her house has cameras on the front and backyard, for security purposes. The killer is currently hacking into said security system, and trying to watch her walk the dog. He wants to see if he can spot the tattoo on her wrist, and assure himself the curse successfully went through. This way, he can begin his torture, eternity of sadness on the victim, and eventually, kill her.
This is what I have come up with so far. I'm thinking of putting the credits at the beginning, over photos of old and nice memories of the daughter and her mother together. This would be followed by the title, "Haunted Memories". With some more adjustments, and additions I can finalize my project idea and stay on track with my schedule. This means next week I will be deciding on costumes, and working on creating the soundtrack!
Wednesday, February 12, 2025
Theory integration
After re-reading my media theories paper, I found a theory that could be important to integrate into my opening. The Binary opposition theory, from Levi Strauss, states that we experience life through the concept of opposites. Popular ones seen in movies are good vs. evil, and birth and death. By using this theory you have two opposing elements, working together to develop a narrative.
By incorporating the binary opposition theory into my opening, I can set the scene for the rest of the story and create conflict to keep things interesting. My (developing) plot has a building argument, with two opposing sides. I'm going to keep adding to this and finalize my narrative by the end of this third week.
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Tuesday, February 11, 2025
Group meeting #1
In our first group meeting we were able to talk to each other and share our ideas. The goal was to build off of each other, provide feedback, and help. We started off by sharing our genres that we chose, I noticed that the majority of the group chose thriller. We read each others blogs and talked about some positive and negative things we did to help us in our previous projects.
By sharing our plots and ideas, we helped each other fill in the gaps. For example, I was stuck between two title options for my opening, and I got my groups opinions. Most of them suggested I go with "Haunted Memories". This group activity helped me get feedback for my blogs and my ideas for the project so far. We all helped each other, Santina didn't know where to add her title in, and we collectively came up with a solution. We suggested she incorporates her title into the diary, which is her main prop. Instead of editing the title onto the screen, she can handwrite it in the notebook, she though this was really creative and liked the idea.
We had uplifting and constructive conversations flowing, where everyone was always chiming in. We related some of our ideas, and shared our reasoning's behind decisions.
(Group photo)
To help each other during the meeting, we shared a document and wrote critiques for each others plots and blogs. Under our names on the document we each shared our blog link, plot, setting, genre, title, and location. This is what we wrote...
Genre: Thriller
Setting to film: Park, or any house
Plot: Not sure about idea yet, has a couple options. Like relaxing at his house after a long day of work and he goes about his day. He then gets a phone call from a mysterious person, once he answers the voice says, “YOU HAVE TO WAKE UP! WAKE UP NOW BEFORE...” and then the man wakes up.
No title
Critique-Nicholas: Overall, solid idea, try to add more detail and make longer though.
https://nickminds.blogspot.com/
My name: Nicholas
Genre: Horror/Psychological Thriller
As of Monday, my group does not know what we are going to do but we have some ideas and some films we are inspired by.
Plot #1: One idea was a zombie apocalypse with 2 survivors in a forest running away from a monster on a dark, foggy night and they stop running after a couple seconds thinking they escaped. The 2 survivors start walking with the map they got of the park and then they suddenly hear the sound of something breaking but don’t think much of it. They suddenly hear a monster creeping up onto them and the scene would end with the zombie on top of the person about to eat them.
Critique: -Gabe, minimal running. Running is boring, no one wants to see running. Terrible idea.
Some films I am inspired by films like the shining, Halloween, and jaws as I really enjoyed these movies and would want to be created something like this
https://superawesomekidcook.blogspot.com/2025/02/researchanalyzediscuss-three-film.html
Name: Adil
Genre: Thriller
Plot: A godzilla inspired film, given by Stoklosa due to the fact that our group had no idea what to do. The setting takes place in a dark forest (Mark and park), story dynamic may be derived from Jurassic Park (T. Rex Escape scene) and how science will be humanities un-doing (Life finds a way) Take the new Jurassic world rebirth trailer for example, the new abnormality that is the main focus is a dinosaur called D-Rex/Deformed Rex. This can be a mirroring towards my film as my monster escapes from containment as scientists got too full of themselves and thought they had full control over the monster. (That is all the information as of now)
https://santinamp.blogspot.com/
Santina Moreno
Genre: Drama
Title: Dear Diary;
Plot: The main character is a girl who is very isolated and doesn't have a lot of friends, so when the last day of school ends, she goes directly home to find no one there either. During her car ride home, we want some non-diegetic music in the background and start the credit sequence until she goes into her room and closes the blinds, and the title appears. When the camera pans into the bed, the girl is going to be writing in her diary until her mom comes into her room and takes her out for some ice cream.
https://anasblogrincon.blogspot.com/
Genre: Thriller & Coming of Age
We don't have any title yet
Setting: At the beach during the sunset
Plot: A girl who just turned 21 and went to the beach to drink and celebrate her birthday with some people who she thought were her friends; (There's also a scene where she is in the car with her friends getting to the beach) she gets really drunk and one of her friends takes a picture of her lying on the sand and posts it online. The picture becomes viral, and her parents found out that she was in a bad state and no one was helping her.
Critique- Beatrice: I think your movie examples are good but maybe you should offer more analysis and responses with depth. This way you can learn more about how to use things and what to add into your opening. Maybe try to research more recently produced films, to have better examples.
Beatrice: my blog
Genre: Horror
-Plot: A girl gets cursed and is watched by a killer, she is trying to break the curse. The curse feeds on depression and can be broken with happiness and love. She is depressed because her mom passed away a while ago and ever since her dad has been taking out his anger on her, making their house unsafe and their relationship weak. When she gets cursed, we see a tattoo appear on her, its matching with the killer. The title will be seen when she's looking at herself in the mirror, distraught, after being cursed.
-Setting: house of the family
-Title: Haunted memories (?)
Critique- Santina: develop how she got the curse with a flashback
Gabe: add more depth on the curse